Comments on the First 3 Blog Posts

Ourgroup
A big well done to members of ourgroup, who have produced a very informative and attractive mind-map of the text “ Learning to Cope with Corporate Culture Clashes”. Would have liked seeing your company profile written in paragraph form though the addition of the short video clip about Body Shop is indeed a good introduction to the company and the products they have.
To the two boys in the group, Justin and Zhou Cheng, make sure that you provide male insights to the different tasks that will be given in the next few weeks.

Five4stars
Interesting summary of the key points in “ Learning to Cope with Corporate Culture Clashes”. You have presented a very different illustration of the key points, which clearly shows that you have understood the major issues brought up in the text.
Very good description of Maxis.
And most of all, I like the group profile, with the group picture!!

swzone
I love the way you have introduced your group members as well as explained why the title “First Time” was chosen and to add to your “first time”, this is really the first time for any blog project that a group has explained why they have chosen a specific blog title to well done to you.
The explanation about Maxis could do with more elaboration though. You seem to be more focused on explaining the shifting of company premises, though I would have loved to know more about what the core business of Maxis is.
Your summary of the key points in the reading text “ Learning to Cope with Corporate Culture Clashes” could have been more developed. No worries though, you will have the opportunity to do the same thing in a few more blog tasks to come.

herodba
Your group profile could have been more expanded had you explained to me how the four of you met. I would have also loved to see a picture of all the group members.
A suggestion for improvement in your company profile. You could have written and expanded upon the history and development of Virgin Group by articulating your ideas in paragraph form.
A good job on the reading text “One Day in My Life”. Your mindmap is clear and easily understood.

Ethnic-six
I love your group’s name. So creative. Your member’s profile is interesting, with good descriptions of all the members. Would have loved to hear about my fellow Convent junior, Tasha…so please…tell me more about yourself!
You could improve on your company profile by presenting a summarized version of the content you have in paragraph form.
Your flow chart on the text, “One Day in My Life” is interesting. Keep the good work coming!!

mystyle-dba
The dynamics of your group is really interesting. And the group photo is really nice. I do hope to hear more about the group members.
Very thorough write-up on the Body Shop. Well done on this blog post.
Interesting mind-map of the text “One Day in My Life”. Do pay attention to your colour combination as the points in the “black cloud” are a little difficult to read.